- The title of the article.
- Why you chose to read that article, and one question you would have asked that would have made the article more interesting. Why do you think this would have made it more interesting?
- The example of cause-and-effect.
Wednesday, April 21, 2010
Causes, Effects, and Helping the Author
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1. Milk can removed from bear's head
ReplyDelete2. I chose this article because the picture caught my attention, I would have asked how did the bear get its head in the can. This would've made the article more interesting because the article is very dull and short.
3. The bear's head was stuck in a can, so Firefighters rescued it.
Cyrus stays on Hannah Montana
ReplyDeletebecause I keep hearing that hannah montana is too big for another episode of 'HANNAH MONTANA'
CAUSE:Hannah couldn't make any more shows
EFFECT:Diamond says the 16-year-old singer-actress will film the fresh episodes early next year.
title:milk can removed from bear's head
ReplyDeletei picked it because it looked interesting
i think if they told how he got his head in would have made it better
it would have made it funnier
he got his head stuck in the can, he died
Title : Poodle becomes mother to baby squirrels
ReplyDeleteI chose to read this article because it caught my attention , i like reading things about animals and I thought it was cute story.
One question I would ask is when the housekeeper said she wants to keep wildlife in her house I would ask why ? I think that question would have made it more interesting because I think people should back up there statements .
Cause & Effect : the baby squirrels had to leave SO the momma poodle was depressed.
Does Your Cafeteria put America at Risk? I choose this article because
ReplyDeleteit sounded interesting. why do they have vending machines in the
cafeteria? vending machines shouldn't be in cafeterias.
john r
1.Cafeteria ladies fight back, punish students
ReplyDelete2.i chose to read it because i thought it was interesting,what did the kids have that day of the food fight,because yo could see he scenes of the fight in your mind.
3.they had a foodfight and they got punished by eating only cheese sandwiches
Earth Days Turns 40
ReplyDeleteBecause we not taking care of our earth is know going on 40 and we are not helping to keep our earth clean. if we dont keep our earth healthy, the world is going to come to an end!!!
title: haiti school open after earth quake
ReplyDeleteI chose this article because i felt bad for the kids in haiti, and how none of them never really had a chance to experience school like we did.
If I was to add something to the article, I would have asked what can americans do to help haiti kids and adults
the cause was haiti had a earth quake,the effect was they trying to start up a school for the children that didn't have a great education
if i could do any thing for haiti i would.
The title is a tabby cat who flew on an air plane for free
ReplyDeletea tabby cat named charels who flew from new mexico to chicago while his owner was out of town then they found the cat and thought it was a stray but found out that it had a owner because it had a chip in its shoulder blade
1.tween star justin Bieber proforms at the mall.
ReplyDelete2.i herd this article because i wanted to know why he was going to sing there.it would have made it more interesting because people ant to know why he is there.
3.the cause and effect was he was singing there and the effect was 5 people went to the hospital
the tile is BUMMER! prom goers watch their limo drive away.
ReplyDeleteI read this article cause it looked funny & interesting, I would have asked what their reaction was because it would have made the article more interesting.
the cause is the bank forgot to cancel the repo company to not take the car so they were limoless for prom! :/
1.)Tittle of the article:Milk can removed from bears head
ReplyDelete2.)I choose this article because it looked cool to me and interesting and i kinda felt sad for the bear ad i have heard that the bear later died.I feel very sad for the bear and i think people should love bears just like they love people.
3.)Cause:The bear was hungry Effect:The bear got his head stuck in the can....................SOOOOO......SADD
-World's Tallest Animals Make A Comeback
ReplyDelete-I love giraffes! How do they get that big? So the reader could be thinking about it.
-Instead of disappearing as many feared, though, the giraffes have bounced miraculously back from the brink of extinction, swelling to more than 200 today.
-http://tweentribune.com/content/world’s-tallest-animals-make-comeback
teachers say he is to young to travel
ReplyDeleteit was intresting to read about a thirteen year old in collage
what will you do with ur brainpower
for him to have another reason to go to south africa
if he dosent go they will ruin his plans
- "Wayward cat gets free flight to Chicago."
ReplyDelete- I chose this article because it was about a cat.
- If I was the reporter asking questions I would ask,"How close do you near the airport?" I would ask this question, because if the cat lived far from the airport, then that would be a long walk then it would of took him a few days to get there.
- One example of cause and effect would be, the family went out of town, so the cat ran away.
1. halloween gag
ReplyDelete2. cause it looked interesting why would you stuff mouth with bugs cause it answers everybody question
3. the dare caused him to put bugs in his mouth the effect is that he did
City gets a big valentines day gift; an elephant
ReplyDeleteI picked to read this becaues elephants are different in a good way. I think it would of been more interesting if the article talked about all the brothers and sister the baby elephant had. Everyone woke up at 2 a.m to find elephants blowing there horns to celebrate the new arrival of the baby elephant that had just been born.
1. Her sneakers put a hurt on my nose
ReplyDelete2. I chose to read this book because i wanted to see some stinky shoe's. why did she let her shoes get so dirty. Because my mom would get me if y shoes ever got that dirty.
3. Her shoe' were real dirty so she won a big trophie
1) bummer! prom-goers watch their limo drive away
ReplyDelete2) it was interesting why the limo didn't pick them up. how did the repo man get in the limo. because it would have told how he got in the limo without being noticed
3) because they worked out their issues but forgot to tell the repo company, the car was repoed when they already worked out their issues
MIDDEL SCHOOL WINS Justin BIEBER
ReplyDeleteI chosse this article because i like Justin Bieber.
What could Syms middle School do to win Justin Bieber ,because I want to meet Justin ,and more people might start doing things for the enviorment. people recycled the most cans so they got to go to A Justin Bieber Concert for FREE.
Hot chili can stop you cold
ReplyDeleteI chose to read this article because it had chili in it and because it is a military chili.
Would you eat chili that is 5,000 times hotter than a jalapeno pepper.
Because people would start to imagine eating a pepper 5,000 times hotter than a jalapeno pepper.
If you eat it your mouth will burn.
1.)Cafeteria ladies fight back, punish students
ReplyDelete2.)I wanted to read something odd.
2a.)Why did the article have so little details?
2b.)It would have made it more interesting.
3.)Student started a food fight. [Effect]:Cafeteria workers only make cheese sandwiches.
1. Milk can removed from bear's head.2. The reason why i wanted to read this is article is because the title sounded interesting. Who pulled the can out of the bear's head. Because it gives people more things to think about.3. Because the bear had a milk can stuck in his head,somebody had to pull it out.
ReplyDelete1)would you put a microchip in your dog?
ReplyDelete2)because i thought it's not right to chip any pet,my question would be that ''Why would you want to microchip your dog'',because it would have more thinking to answer it an with other opinion's to it.
3)because people lose there dogs or are vicious than than most likely they will want to chip there dogs.
Title: Milk can removed from bear's head
ReplyDeleteI chose to read this article because it seems weird for a bear to get their head stuck in a milk can in the first place. What did they cut the can off with? Because its gives people more to think about and it would be cool to know.
Since a bear's head got stuck in the can, it took a state biologist, firefighters, and police 45 minutes to get it off.
the title is twilight's vampires on red carpet in rome
ReplyDeletei chose this article,because i like twilight, one question i would of asked questions about the movie because everyone would also like to know more things about it.
the actors that play the volturi are going to be followed by flag twirlers from volterra the tuscan villiage because their characters in he movie that their home.
nolyssa
Australian attacked by kangaroo in his home .
ReplyDeleteI thought this article was really cool , beause the kangaroo looked funny : ) why did the kangaroo attack the human ? it should show more pictures .
The title :Tween Justin Bieber fans lose control at the mall
ReplyDeleteI chose to read this because im a huge fan of Justin Bieber .This article would of make this more interesting if they showed more picture of him .
cause and effect
1. because Justin bieber was singing , his fans went crazy.
1.Does your cafeteria put america at risk
ReplyDelete2.it looked interesting, the kinds of foods in the cafeteria that were making the kids fat. so people could watch out for these foods.
3.because of cafeteria foods students arent being able to persute careers
1. Milk can removed from bears Head.
ReplyDelete2. I chose this article because the title caught my attention and it sounded interesting. My question is how did he get it on his head in the first place? It would have made it more interesting because I am still wondering how a milk can got in the woods in the first place and why he tried to put it on his head.
3. Because he put a milk can on his head he could not go back into the woods.
Title: Milk can removed from bear's head.
ReplyDeleteI chose to read this article because it caught my sight about a 140-pound Black Bear getting his head stuck in a milk can. Because we litter in the woods, the bear got his head stuck.
*Most beautiful "ugly" dog.
ReplyDelete**What makes ugly dogs do beautiful. I think it would make the passage more interesting to read because I believe most people would like to know what makes dogs on the outside ugly but beautiful on inside and what makes them unique.
***As the result of him winning, he was very confident.
1. The worlds tallest horse is in wisconsin 2. Because this is the tallest horse in the world and I want to now what two horses this horse came from. 3. Because the horse was born It grew and it was the tallest horse ever that was born.
ReplyDeleteTitle: Milk can removed from bear's head
ReplyDeleteIt looked like something I would see on animal planet.
One question of mine is how and why did the bear get it's head in the milk can?
This question would make it intresting because people would find out how it got it on it's head.
cause and effect: Because the bear had a milk can on it's head, it ran into trees and boulders.
The title is :Poodle becomes mother to baby squirrels.I chose this article because it sounded interesting and I wanted to know more about this weird article.If i could ask one question it would be:Why did she keep the squirrels? I thought this would make it more interesting because I wanted to know how she felt when she first saw them. Three baby squirrels lost there home as a result pixie treated like they were her own puppies.
ReplyDelete1 Sony's 3-D TVs are compatible with PlayStation
ReplyDelete2 I chose this article because i love video games and how they can become 3D
3 Would they ever make a 3D TV compatible with a Xbox 360
4 I think it would have been more interesting because a lot more people have Xbox 360s
5 The cause and effect is:
where ever you sit around the 3D television, there is a camera on the television that adjusts sound and picture quality
- the title of the article is middle school wins justin bieber.
ReplyDelete- because i love justin bieber.
- if u pay could you get into the school for the concert?
- because it would be nice for people who helped too but didn't win to see him.
- they collected cans so they got a concert from justin bieber.
-The title is : Earth Day turns 40: No more rivers on fire
ReplyDelete-I chose this article because it is interesting know that there was a earth day before we were born and how the Cleveland's Cuyahoga River caught fire caught on fire because of an oil spill. How did the oil spill happen ?
-Because of the oil spill in the Cleveland Cuyahoga River, the river caught on fire and it has harmful chemicals.
Worlds fastest man Usain Bolt
ReplyDeletebecause he ran in 9:58 sec that set his own world record in 100 meters in 11 sec.What did you do to run so fast like that?Because he would have told everybody and they would have to train like he did to run so fast.
The cause was he ran in 9:58 and the affect was he was known as the worlds fastest man
Most Beautiful "Ugly" Dog
ReplyDeleteI chose this article, because I like dogs. I would ask if the dogs really do like getting dressed up. I think this would be an interesting question, because people have different opinions on animals. My cause and effect is that since Meatball got all dressed up and pretty, he won the pageant.
Milk can removed from bear's head.
ReplyDeleteI chose this article because be cause it look really sad and i wanted to see if the bear got hurt.
I think it wood make the article more interesting if it told if the bear got hurt.
The bear was looking for food in a milk jug then he got his head stuck.
1. Title-Milk can removed from bear's head
ReplyDelete2.I chose this article because I've never heard of a bear having it's
head stuck in a old fashion milk jug. To make the article more interesting, is if it told what gender it was. It wouldn't keep the reader's wondering if it was a female or male.
3. Since the bear put his head in a milk jug, he got his head stuck.
1. title:teen makes prom dress out of gum wrappers
ReplyDelete2. why i choose to read this article is because it sounded cool i didnt know you could make dress out of gum wrappers.the question i would ask would be how did all the gum wrappers stay togeather,because i bet alot of people were wondering.
3. cause:the girl had alot of gum wrappers Effect:she made her prom dress out of it.
Title: Worlds Tallest Horse in Wisconsin
ReplyDeleteI chose to read this article because i thought it was very interesting to know how tall the horse was.I would have asked How much the horse the weigh because the reader can get a better picture of what the gorse looks like.
Cause and Effect: The horse was so tall that he holds the world record for the tallest horse.
1. Beach OKs middle school cell phones
ReplyDelete2. a. It caught my attention with the mention of cells and school.
2. b. What type of uniforms?
2. c. The uniforms are another change in the school policy.
3. Because the kids can carry cell phones on the bus , they are more safe.
Teachers say he's too young to travel - is he?
ReplyDeleteI chose this article because I read one sentence, and was shocked. A question I would ask to make this article more interesting is " Would you have ever thought you would be this smart this early in the stage of your life that you would be in college? " I think this would be good because its more interesting to look in the personality of the person of the article. A cause and effect situation in this article is how the boy Colin began reading on his own in the age of 2, and by the time he was 4 he was reading Harry Potter.
Milk can removed from bear's head.
ReplyDeleteBecause the title caught my attention.
what was the bears reaction when its head was unstuck?
The bear got its head stuck in a milk can so biologist, police, and firefighters got its head unstuck.
wayward cat gets a free flight to chicago
ReplyDeletethe cat looked cute so i figured that i would read it, i would of asked why did they call it a wayward cat because then people would be more interested by the meaning
because the cat was stray they sent it to chicago and i don't know any more.
1. Lady GaGa sweeps awards in England
ReplyDelete2. Because i am a big fan of lady gaga, why did lady gaga win so many awards? maybe because most people will want that question answer.
3. the effect is that lady gaga sweep awards in england, cause is lady gaga won three awrads
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1. Poodle becomes mother to baby squirrels
ReplyDelete2. Because it looked interesting
How did Pixie find the squirrels
Because then you would be able to imagine how it all started
3. The baby squirrels where so weaned so the dog could let them go.
1.'Keep an eye on kitty with a "cat cam"
ReplyDelete2.I chose to read this article because I wish to be able to keep an eye on what my cat Perdita Anne McVicker is doing when I'm not home.
How many more humans will discover their cat's secret lives? It would -for me at least- make it seem like a "Dateline" question.
3. Because these people invented the "cat cam" owners can now know what their cats are up to.
to gabby i love the post that you wrote its was really cool when i herd that they made a dress out of gum rapers we should talk more about it sometimes soon!
ReplyDelete1. Milk can removed from bear's head.
ReplyDelete2. I picked this article because the title caught my attention when i looked at it and i love bears. I wonder how the bear got the can on his head in the first place ?
3. The bar got his head stuck in the can so the men had to pull it off.
Grace, of course would do this article(:. This article does look interesting. I would like to read this. Your question would make it more interesting. How did they think when they saw this sight? Hm..... Good job Grace! (:
ReplyDeleteto Janiyah Jones... that is a very interesting thing how did the poodle find the squirrels and how did the squirrels let the poodle stay with them.?
ReplyDeleteTo liam :
ReplyDeletei wonder about your question also. And i do agree that they need to include that because it would have made it more interesting.
To Grace i thought i was interesting also about the dog became baby squirrels thats very cool one day i wanna see them!!!!!!!!!!:)
ReplyDeleteI really like the comments people put on this blog I really like the idea of everyone writing what they think and i think harrison and gabriella's was great comments and many more.
ReplyDeletepaula i like that you chose to read that article i think it is cool to learn about the worlds tallest horse
ReplyDelete